Sunday, February 4, 2018

BREATHER

you took a little piece of me

i bet you've forgotten you have it

tucked away in a book with a dog-eared page

that piece of my heart sat

but then you packed all your books away

you sealed the top tight

away went that piece of my heart

yet i stayed quiet

i figured out i dont need that piece

to be whole is to give it all away

yet hope some day you'll lend me that book

so that i can see you still kept it

that little piece of my heart

that i'll never forget





here's some random poetry i wrote on the spot about some random heart feelings. i took a breather! (if you hadn't already noticed my absence) i was quite overwhelmed with life for a few months! i hope you'll forgive me and understand. lots of crazy good and just plain crazy things happening in life right now! i got accepted to COLLEGE! Whaaa?! I graduate highschool in three months!! Super crazy, guys. I've also been working on my first NOVEL. My eldest brother moved out. There is so much going on y'all! i have much love for you guys! i'm back on the blogtrain. (choo choo!) exciting news coming soon! stay tuned.

-jr
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13 comments:

  1. NoorFebruary 7, 2018 at 4:03 PM

    oooff this is gorgeous!!

    and congrats on everything, especially college WOWOW that's amazing :D

    ~ noor
    a little bit of sunshine

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  2. Grace AnneFebruary 17, 2018 at 7:11 PM

    this is so beautiful. wow i love your writing.

    SO EXCITED FOR ALL OF THE AWESOME THINGS HAPPENING IN YOUR LIFE. <3 (also really want to read this novel)

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  3. Hanne TApril 23, 2018 at 9:12 AM

    Aaack I love this!!!

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  4. Mason SoizaJuly 13, 2018 at 4:10 AM

    Beautiful poem!..Keep on writing poems dear :)

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  5. Peter Gale GodalmingJuly 16, 2018 at 6:37 AM

    Wonderful piece of poem and Congrats on your first novel.

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  6. Susan GreenfieldJuly 25, 2018 at 8:02 AM

    Glad you make it through college. Looking forward on your new journey and well written poem.

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  7. Mark Deitch BBCJuly 26, 2018 at 7:19 AM

    I'm happy and proud of you dear. Keep the fire burning.

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  8. Sir Jack BrabhamJuly 31, 2018 at 7:06 AM

    Looking forward on your Novel. It's a beautiful poem.

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  9. Experience InvestAugust 8, 2018 at 3:25 AM

    You deserved it dear. You have been working hard to earn this things. Good luck!

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  10. Robert Van SchalkwykAugust 20, 2018 at 7:38 AM

    Love reading your poem. Looking forward for more.

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  11. Hassan Sadiq HimexAugust 30, 2018 at 10:52 AM

    Beautiful poem! Looking forward for more of your poem.

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  12. Elaine AmphlettSeptember 18, 2018 at 1:35 AM

    Wow! I just love it!

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  13. VanessaSeptember 28, 2018 at 2:44 PM

    <3 This is so refreshing to read. I love this. I enjoy how this connects through a book.

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